User:Hans

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Education

[Dario Andres] All the changes were uploaded. I splitted Marble description into feature items. Please check them. Regards


"The game has several categories of words to play with and among them: Animals (animals words) and three difficulty categories: Easy, Medium and Hard."

>> "The game has several categories of words to play with, for example Animals (animals words), and three difficulty categories: Easy, Medium and Hard."

"apable to make simple MathML operations "

>> "capable to make simple MathML operations "

"The display includes upto 100 million stars"

>> "The display includes up to 100 million stars"

"Is a program that visualizes the Periodic Table of Elements"

>> "It is a program that visualizes the Periodic Table of Elements"

Doesn't seem to follow the other description styles.

Too wordy, could put some under "Features" instead.

"KLettres is an application specially designed to do help the user to"

>> "KLettres is an application specially designed to help the user to"

"KmPlot is a program to draw graphs, theit integrals or their derivations"

>> "KmPlot is a program to draw graphs, their integrals or derivatives (?)"

"the carthesic or the polar system"

>> "the Cartesian or the polar coordinate system"